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Tuesday, January 8, 2008
Assertive Sentence Excersie
1. The goal of much modern art is changing the criteria for what people consider ugly.

2. It must be recognized by the American Hospital Association that such costs cannot be aforded by many families.

3. The winners in the photgraphic contest will be announced within three days.

4. We abandoned our safety precautions, once the danger perished.
posted by erinederbo @ 8:12 PM   0 comments
Tuesday, December 18, 2007
Simple, Compound, and Complex Sentence Excersie
1. Simple

I am tired. I have homework.

2. Compound

I am tired, and I have homework.
I am tired; I have homework.

3. Complex

I have homework, so I am tired.
posted by erinederbo @ 11:52 PM   1 comments
Sentence Structure-Notes
IC= simple sentence: complete thought

example: The cat meowed.

DC= sentence made dependent by a subordinator (SC)

example: Because the cate meowed

Subordinator
Because After
So As long as
Due to Before
Since If
Although Unless
Until
Relative Pronouns
Who What
Which That
1) Simple: The dog ran. The car beeped
2) Compound (IC+IC): The dog ran; the car beeped.
The dog ran, and the car beeped.
3) Complex (IC+DC): Because the car beeped, the dog ran.
posted by erinederbo @ 11:41 PM   0 comments
Wednesday, December 5, 2007
Humpty Dumpty Had a Great Fall

--All the President's Men is based upon the nursery rhyme Humpty Dumpty, especially the line, "All the King's horses and all the King's Men, couldn't put Humpty together again." (More about this on our final). Why do you think the reporters chose this title for their book (and movie)? Be detailed.



The children’s nursery rhyme Humpty Dumpty relates to the situation of President Nixon throughout the Watergate Scandal. Humpty Dumpty’s lyrical nursery rhyme states:

“Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall.
Humpty Dumpty had a great fall
All the King’s horses and all the King’s Men,
Couldn’t put Humpty together again.”

This image of Humpty Dumpy as a representation of President Nixon was adapted by Alan J. Pakula’s 1976 film, All the President’s Men as well as the major Watergate Washington Post reporters, Carl Bernstein and Bob Woodward, book as a way to not only capture audiences attention by satirically comment on President Nixon’s overall political administration. Like Nixon, Humpty Dumpty sits on a protective wall which is then shattered and unable to be “put back together by others. This leads to Humpty‘s, as it did Nixon’s‘, demise or fall.

In the first line of the nursery rhyme the “wall” in which Humpty sits on, in reference to President Nixon, are the array of less politically important people who were involved in the Watergate operation. These less important political partners of Nixon created a “wall” around the President and, for a short while, deterred sparse media attention and the FBI’s investigation from the Oval Office. These men, whom where portrayed in All the President’s Men, through characters such as Hugh Sloan, one by one took the blame for the President and distracted from the facts that the Watergate Scandal actually reached Nixon as well as his top advisors such as H.R. Haldeman.

Next, the second and third line refer to Nixon having a great fall once he could no longer stay sitting on his protective “wall” of those less important then he. Once Bernstein and Woodrow got a hold of information that led to Nixon, and was also confirmed by FBI spy Deep Throat, there was no more hiding that could be done by the President. This, on top of the fact that all his men, as paralleled in the last two lines of Humpty Dumpty, couldn’t help him, caused him to fall. As soon as Nixon tumbled, he was unable to get back up and like Humpty was now broken and cracked. His integrity, dignity, and pride were shattered while his first political term and his part, the Republicans, were left wounded by the Scandal. No longer were political leaders in America trusted.

Overall, the title of the film’s reference to Humpty Dumpty not only made sense symbolically but also was able to catch the eye and attention of it’s audiences. The title All the President’s Men being parallel to the line in Humpty Dumpty, “All the King’s Horses and all the King’s Men,” also shows the power of Bernstein and Woodrow . Two men with only a typewriter and a publisher were able to take down the President of the United States of America to the point were he couldn’t be put back together again. An act that is far more complex then that of a nursery rhyme.

movie source: www.

posted by erinederbo @ 12:57 AM   0 comments
Saturday, November 24, 2007
giving
she drove through city blocks of
those less fortunate than her;
arrived at the child's front porch
knocked on his door and presented
him with a yellow toy truck,
"merry christmas."
posted by erinederbo @ 1:40 PM   0 comments
Tuesday, November 6, 2007
coffee
If I could, I'd be your coffee,
warm your soul each morning
with slow sips.

You'd let me inside and
I'd become part of you;
paste my caffienated grounds
on the walls of your stomach
like we'd paste boy band pictures
on your bedroom walls.

Nestled between your fingers,
there would be no more driving
over state lines because
you could take me anywhere.
posted by erinederbo @ 6:20 PM   0 comments
ode to china town
three dollar tins of loose tea leaves
decorated with geisha beauties
behind paper fans
clothe mary janes-two for five
the best kind of slippers
orange chicken and rice,
seven bucks settling
deep inside my stomach
an hour long slice
of red line riding
and the language of your sidewalks
following me home.
priceless.
posted by erinederbo @ 6:17 PM   0 comments
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